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Historical Fiction: using you and thou
Generally speaking, English once used 'you' as the second person plural (equivalent to 'vous' and 'vós') and 'thou' as the second person singular (equivalent to 'tu'). When talking to a person in a higher position, one would use the polite 'you'…
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How do you write 2 or more characters saying almost the same thing in unison
When 2 or more characters speak in unison you can generally do something like this
"awwwww, she's so cute!" the girls said in unison in near perfect harmony
but what about when the line is only slightly different
Person 1: but i'm not...
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How can I Switch Protagonists Between Books?
Disclaimer: I am not intending on doing this. It is just a question I thought was fascinating and might be useful to other writers.
Here's the scenario. You're writing a series of novels. After the first book, you decide to change to a new…
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How do I avoid a “mid-story info dump?”
I am revising the manuscript for a novel. About a third into the story, a major turning point occurs when the main character (through whom the reader follows the story) realizes that things are not at all how she perceived them to be, and that she…
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Why is "It was a dark and stormy night.." not a good opening?
Also, why has it spawned an award for bad writing?
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What is a good methodology for researching a historical novel?
I'm having difficulty with the research aspect of my historical novel. This question was originally going to be "how much research should one do to write a historical novel?" to which, answering my own question is, "as much as you need to". …
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How to avoid the 'magic explanation' info dump in Fantasy novels
In the second book of his Inheritence Cycle, Christopher Paolini makes the grievous error of landing his main character in the middle of a serene woodland where he must sit and talk with an old elf for many seemingly unending days. It isn't a true…
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How to find authenticity in a character of color
I am working on a book. I am aware that, being a white guy, I always perceive characters as white men. I want to push myself into building a character that is black.
My problem is that most of the people in my world are white. The blacks friends…
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Lists of Suggested Magazines to Submit To
I recently began writing poetry again. I would like to look into submitting my poems to a magazine.
Where can I find a list of literary magazines through which I could sort to find a possible fit?
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What's the benefit of using invented languages in-story?
I'm working on a fictional story set in a fantastical (although coherent) universe. I'm used to seeing invented languages in works like this: Tolkien's languages for The Lord of the Rings, or Paolini's languages for his Inheritance Trilogy.
So, they…
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What's a good writing software for Android phones/tablets?
Everyone once in a while while I'm out I come up with something I want to add to my story. Are there any good writing apps for Android phones and tablets? Most places that recommend mobile writing software recommend iPhone apps, but what about the…
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How much time should you devote to learning the craft?
When is enough, enough?
Some writers argue that you don’t need how-to books, just practicing writing. Yet, many writers write beautifully but are incapable of producing a publishable novel, while mediocre writers sometimes sprout best-sellers .…
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Methods for creating slang
I am interested in creating slang or a vernacular for a particular group in my story. I want it to be distinctive and a definite marker for in-group/out-group, but not incomprehensible. I'm not looking for industry jargon, and it's not extensive…
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Time management for part-time writing
I'm currently writing a book, and would eventually hope to be a writer as a career. However, at the moment I'm struggling to find the time and the discipline to actually sit down and write consistently.
I know that writing (and most other…
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How can I turn my short story into a novel?
I just wrote last week about Sleeping Beauty but a different version of it. (I changed the characters, and the conflict, and mostly everything except the fact that one of the main characters is cursed and must fall asleep, only to be woken by true…
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