Character with two names

Question

I have a character with two names. Well not two distinct names, but rather two forms of the same name. My story is set in the later Roman Empire, but the characters are Romanized easterners living on the desert frontier. They have both native Aramaic names and Latinized names.

For example, the main character's husband is the Roman governor of Syria. He speaks Aramaic in private and lives in a mostly-Aramaic speaking area where he is called "Odainat" by most including his wife, but on official Roman business he uses the name "Odaenathus." I have other Roman POVs that also call him this.

The way I planned it, the two forms of the name would appear with equal frequency. I wanted to use both to be historically accurate, but I'm wondering whether or not this will be annoying or confusing to the reader. Any advice?

Answer 1

I know you said this is based on an ancient Roman custom, but the way you describe it - a longer name used in formal settings and a shorter version used among friends and family - makes it sound like "Odaenathus" is his real name and "Odainat" is a nickname. This, to me, feels similar to how a character in a modern novel might be called "Matthew" by some characters and "Matt" by others.

I expect most readers would interpret it in the same way, and therefore this wouldn't be confusing at all to them.

Answer 2

Given that most characters in the Lord of the Rings books have at least two names, and that it is successful, I would see no problem.

Keep the use of each name local to the appropriate scene.
And, drop in the occasional reminder to the reader that the character has two names.

Indeed, in your case where the names are simply cultural variants, it should be easier than my example.

Answer 3

I think it’s fine. It doesn’t sound like your character has two names, more like two titles. And that’s normal for everyone if you take the time to think about it. For example, say you run a company and have a family. You would be called “Boss” by your employees, “Mr./Mrs. _______” by your partners and colleagues, “first name” by your husband or wife and friends, and “dad/mom” By your kids. It’s never confusing who they mean, it just depends on who is saying his name.

Answer 4

This works more than fine. Russian novels frequently refer to characters by various different names -- for example, in "Crime and Punishment", one of the central character's full name is Avdotya Romanovna Raskolnikov. Depending on the context, and who is speaking to her, she is alternatingly called Avdotya, Dunya, Dunechka, Avdotya Romanovna, or by her full name.

Answer 5

In my opinion, the best way to cement two names together in a reader's mind is to have the narrative describe him one way while a character describes him another way.

"Is that you, Odainat?"

"Yes," Odaenathus said.

Obviously, make it less forced than that, but the important thing is to tie the names together in the same passage.

Answer 6

he is called "Odainat" by most including his wife, but on official Roman business he uses the name "Odaenathus."

Mention it the first time that Roman officials converse with him. "Hail, Odaenathus! How fare thee? some polite small talk The locals call you Odainat, I hear. Is that true?"

Answer 7

It's alright as long as you use it sparingly i.e., reserving such luxury for the main characters in the story, or the main characters in an arc. Anything more will likely irk some section of readers. That said, the only exception to this rule is the titles. Your main characters can have many titles which may change per arc. But since we're talking about the literal names themselves, make sure to give a bit more 'added' weight and meaning to those names so that the readers will know and connect with the characters better and thus also remember them better.

Answer 8

It sounds like you're planning to choose which name to use based on the POV character. That should work fine, as long as:

1. it's clear that you're referring to the same person each time, and

2. you don't switch POV too often. (It's not a good idea to change POV within a single scene.)

Answer 9

I would suggest using the names when appropriate and, if the character is POV, introduce him to the readers using the name he would prefer the readers to call him. To give a modern example, if I was writing about a character with the name "James Tiberius Kirk", he would use different names with different people. James Tiberius Kirk is his legal name and would be used in a formal or legal context (Say an academy admissions form or a disciplianry hearing), where as using pet names of Jimmy might be family and close friends, Jim might be more friends or very close working collegues, J.T. might be among his primary (elementary, middle, and high school) friends, to whom he felt James/Jimmy/Jim was too common or silly and the first and second name initials are way to cool (especially if the name is an unfortunate name pun after a pop culture icon... Looking at you, Degrassi). And to those to whom his job makes him a superior to, he might use his last name only with an appropriate title (Mr. Kirk, if he was teaching a classroom of students... Captain Kirk if he was a commanding officer on an Enterprising vessle of exploration).

The reader however, should be introduced to the character in a way the character calls himself (James Kirk) unless their is a significance to a dual identity nature that we should establish. This exception usually comes up in cases where there is an alter ego (Batman/Bruce Wayne) or more (Clark Kent/Kal-El/Superman). The two selected individuals are highlighted because among superhero fans, they often stand in contrast to one another in how they are precieved. To the later, the character is Clark Kent, while his birthname is Kal-El, and his created public persona is Superman. To the former, many fans will argue that "Batman" is the character, while Bruce Wayne is both a birth name and a created public persona (often writers will go out of the way to show that Bruce Wayne, when talking to himself, calls himself "Batman" rather than Bruce. Contrasted, Superman will call himself "Clark" when talking to himself.).

Answer 10

I know several people from China living in English speaking areas and having two completely different given names. No relation between those names and often people know them by one or the other name. And sometimes they also use different family names, like a widow might use her (former) married name with some people and her maiden name with others, and those can both be combined with either first name.

Sometimes when at a meeting one of the ladies is expecting a relative or old time friend and she warns us under which name or combination of names they will ask for her.

Your proposed combination of names seems tame when you know that.
You seem to have a local language version and a Latinized version of that same name. You may want to explain it once, but that is all you need. It might even be clear without any explanation.
Unlike my friends.